Here goes
Heads up, I'm going to be a harsh judge for everyone in this comp. Although I will 10 every entry.
Lyrics: 13: loved the multies, and I like how most of your lines are personalized to him. I'm ignoring the fact that you can't knock him out first round because this is the seeding round because that's a recent change). I can't give you more than 13 because aluminium really isn't all that hard to crack. But good job overall.
Delivery: 4 : You've probably heard this a thousand times by now, but you don't bring a lot of energy to the mic, that's you weak point.
Style: 4: Cool rhyme schemes. You've also got a pretty cool style of flow, especially at the start of this. However, I do feel like I've heard that style before, but 4/7 isn't a bad job.
Overall: 21