Blasphem-E's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Take as many 5's as you want]

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Don't talk son less you move south
Son livin it up thinkin you rough

Dude, you dissing the north here? I'd recommend looking up your stats before you speak. MANY Canadian cities have a higher crime rate than NYC.

You're relapsing on your flow again, it's back to horrible. remember what I told you about slowing down and making quality over quantity?

Broken-Needle responds:

bro, dont worry I'm about 2 re-record read the first reviews response.... and no im not talking about canada, Madwigged says hes from new york state and therefore he's tougher than me, however he's from UPstate which is filled with looser potheads...

[Nothing Wrong With Me (no]

In comes Wyze!

Wyld, I sent ashley the track with vocals. (well, sending it as I write this). Full version sounds pretty cool, but it really does need vocals lol.

[(DJ-T) Sleeping]

review

I'll start with the negative, then I'll get into the positive, then I'll finish it with my pizza order

Cons:

That line at 1:37 didn't work. Ok, maybe not the line itself, but the synth you chose didn't sound right to me at all.

Snares seem a bit too spread apart, but that may be the speed involved here, what bpm is this at?

The line that begins at 3:09 is ok, but in the high parts of your melody there, that synth seems to be going outside it's comfort range

I think your hi hat could have used either a longer or shorter release, I don't think it's working great as it is. Either a crisp closed sound or a longer open fallout would have worked wonders there.

Pros:

LOVED the snare rolls. Sounded awesome

The techno beginning with the hip hop drums isn't normally done very well, but you pulled it off well

The synth at 1 minute is done really well.

Overall:

Not bad, but I'd still say it's a bit more techno than hip hop. All the same, cool track and congratulations on #1.

Also, I'll have a medium pepperoni pizza and a bottle of coke. It's my understanding that it is 30 minutes or it's free?

zenodio responds:

The king of the Hip Hop on NG reviewed my song =D

Thank you very much, and about that with the BPM... Can't really remember, it's around 90 - 110

Again, thank you.
You're a great source of inspiration, haven't heard much of your stuff, but the few songs i've heard was decent!

Sorry, but i don't really know what more to say.

[The daily Mad Wigged diss]

ok?

second get ya virginity
literaly off of ma shoes

So you're saying he hasn't fucked your shoes. What is with that line? When your quality is off (not something you can be blamed for) and your flow still needs work (something you can be blamed for, although in all fairness, you have been improving.), then your lyrics all need to be great. These weren't great, some of them didn't even make sense.

I understand you're trying to do a diss a day, but quality over quantity man. Keep at it, but take your time

Broken-Needle responds:

ma foots up his bootleg ass.

[RaC2 Anthem (Dirty)]

Sick

Awesome lyrics and I love your sound. But your voice is a small bit too quiet, needs to be made a little bit louder. That would make this awesome. Very cool beat too, you make it?

[(WF1) April 1st Death threat]

NO MORE!!

Lmao. Hilarious. Great job Sunrie.

wyldfyre1 responds:

woo hoo

[(WF1)Spirits of the forest WIP]

Ok. Fine. I'll review now. Jerk.

Love those bells. very nice strings. Good sound, but again a bit on the short side.

wyldfyre1 responds:

its a W I P man you know that lol. thanks for the review.

[F-777 & Wyldfyre1 - Journey Into Twilight]

penis penis penis

Fuck that nonsense below me. That break was awesome, provided quite the change in style before the buildback. However, I do agree that the intro doesn't really fit the rest of the song - maybe rework that a bit? I love 1:52 how it comes back full force, very cool feeling after the build. Nice ending as well.

As for heavenly tears, I will once again say that I am willing to pay as much as $30 for a physical copy of the CD (provided it's autographed or something), but I'm not giving you a dime before then :) love ya though Jesse. lol

[Kazmo: The Song That Never Was]

Very good

Extremely good job on the vocals. The rest was nice too, but the vocals were what really shone.

Kazmo responds:

I'm very glad you enjoyed it! :D

I really wanted to focus on the vocals in this song. :]

Thanks for stopping by!

[Does your president pray?]

Very good

Very good points in this, love the style. I'm going to agree with ingenius about the background, although the strings are a small bit too loud I think. But, that's a puny issue in a voice over track that is done very well.

Well done.