Blasphem-E's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[(DJ-T) Sleeping]

review

I'll start with the negative, then I'll get into the positive, then I'll finish it with my pizza order

Cons:

That line at 1:37 didn't work. Ok, maybe not the line itself, but the synth you chose didn't sound right to me at all.

Snares seem a bit too spread apart, but that may be the speed involved here, what bpm is this at?

The line that begins at 3:09 is ok, but in the high parts of your melody there, that synth seems to be going outside it's comfort range

I think your hi hat could have used either a longer or shorter release, I don't think it's working great as it is. Either a crisp closed sound or a longer open fallout would have worked wonders there.

Pros:

LOVED the snare rolls. Sounded awesome

The techno beginning with the hip hop drums isn't normally done very well, but you pulled it off well

The synth at 1 minute is done really well.

Overall:

Not bad, but I'd still say it's a bit more techno than hip hop. All the same, cool track and congratulations on #1.

Also, I'll have a medium pepperoni pizza and a bottle of coke. It's my understanding that it is 30 minutes or it's free?

zenodio responds:

The king of the Hip Hop on NG reviewed my song =D

Thank you very much, and about that with the BPM... Can't really remember, it's around 90 - 110

Again, thank you.
You're a great source of inspiration, haven't heard much of your stuff, but the few songs i've heard was decent!

Sorry, but i don't really know what more to say.

[The daily Mad Wigged diss]

ok?

second get ya virginity
literaly off of ma shoes

So you're saying he hasn't fucked your shoes. What is with that line? When your quality is off (not something you can be blamed for) and your flow still needs work (something you can be blamed for, although in all fairness, you have been improving.), then your lyrics all need to be great. These weren't great, some of them didn't even make sense.

I understand you're trying to do a diss a day, but quality over quantity man. Keep at it, but take your time

Broken-Needle responds:

ma foots up his bootleg ass.

[RaC2 Anthem (Dirty)]

Sick

Awesome lyrics and I love your sound. But your voice is a small bit too quiet, needs to be made a little bit louder. That would make this awesome. Very cool beat too, you make it?

[(WF1) April 1st Death threat]

NO MORE!!

Lmao. Hilarious. Great job Sunrie.

wyldfyre1 responds:

woo hoo

[(WF1)Spirits of the forest WIP]

Ok. Fine. I'll review now. Jerk.

Love those bells. very nice strings. Good sound, but again a bit on the short side.

wyldfyre1 responds:

its a W I P man you know that lol. thanks for the review.

[F-777 & Wyldfyre1 - Journey Into Twilight]

penis penis penis

Fuck that nonsense below me. That break was awesome, provided quite the change in style before the buildback. However, I do agree that the intro doesn't really fit the rest of the song - maybe rework that a bit? I love 1:52 how it comes back full force, very cool feeling after the build. Nice ending as well.

As for heavenly tears, I will once again say that I am willing to pay as much as $30 for a physical copy of the CD (provided it's autographed or something), but I'm not giving you a dime before then :) love ya though Jesse. lol

[Kazmo: The Song That Never Was]

Very good

Extremely good job on the vocals. The rest was nice too, but the vocals were what really shone.

Kazmo responds:

I'm very glad you enjoyed it! :D

I really wanted to focus on the vocals in this song. :]

Thanks for stopping by!

[WyzGuyz - Paranoia]

Man..

You guys have flow, and your sound is half decent. There's a problem though, your hook sounds way too thin.

Also, you have that 1 sound in your beat, right before you do that hook that sounds like you're using the same synth as T-Pain and Flow Rida's "Low". I'd recommend changing up that synth to a slightly different sound because I'm pretty sure most people would associate that sound with that song, but it's your call.

[-=MNSP=- 52 Bars of Pain]

Good

Cool track, although 52 bars seems like a random length. By the way, you forgot to add fap to the end of the rate, comment etc...

InGenius responds:

Not a random length, this beat was originally built with intro, 16 bar verse, 8 bar hook, 4 bar break, 16 verse, 8 hook, outro. Add everything but the intro and outro together: 16+8+4+16+8=52. He used up the whole beat rather than using it in conventional setup. And Mr. What It Do surprised the SHIT out of me with the spit he threw at me. He was jammin' my WIPs and heard this track and just said "This one's all mine. I'm takin' it." Shit, what was I to say but "Have it!" And this is what he threw down. And I left Fap out so Ashley wouldn't get any ideas...

Peace