Blasphem-E's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Movies (prod. by EmAy)]

Turn up the vocals

Your voice is too quiet in this mix man. turn it up by about 15-20% I'd say. I do like the beat and the flow. Props for the shot at 50. Lyrics are fairly decent, not super amazing, but solid. Also, I think you need to mix the screwed voice in so that it blends with your voice. That would be a really cool effect if it mixed better. Good job overall though.

DocDallas responds:

Thanks a lot.

I'll definitely try out your suggestions, I don't have a final cut yet.

[[A1] HipHop Beat 1]

um...

Man, why am I not hearing a kick near the start? Is it too low or simply not there? Yes I hear it come later, but I'm just curious about the opening. Also, your piano and synths didn't really seem to mix that well. Change up your bass synth as well. After a couple of minutes it gets headache inducing. Honestly, there is some potential here, it just needs to be seriously cleaned up and certain areas need to be rewritten (.i.e. the areas where you have a melody and counter melody that seem completely oblivious of each other.)

Arkell responds:

theres no kick jus a bassline

[~EnV~Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix)]

Envy's greatest song of all time!

Envy man, you are such a one hit wonder! I want this song to have my babies! Rofl. In all seriousness, as much as you hate this song, it is solid man.

Envy responds:

>8(

[~|| Let me share my pain]

Well..

Lol, I'm going to be honest man, ever since I heard the song dog cherry, I haven't liked that opening choir note with that choir lmao.

On a serious note, this is pretty cool. Love the strings you have in this. And other than that opening note, I loved the choir. I would have had the snares just a tad louder though. Also, in the intro, it would have been nice to have a secondary supporting bass synth, just to add to the full dark feeling if you know what I mean.

Just curious here, but how does it sound when you replace the shaker with a clean hat hit? I think it might work if you find the right one.

Keep it up man.

T-Free responds:

I'll work on the track soon. Thank you, Wyze-Stingray.^^

[Hip-Hop]

Scratch beats should be in old school

There is some potential in this. I do like the drums in this, although the snare should be a bit louder. However, I wasn't really feeling the bass line or that piano at the end. Maybe rethink those patterns? The scratching though is quite cool and well done.

GoldbloodedDragon responds:

The "piano" at the end is still bass.
I just used BooBass.

Though, I'll try to fix the snare.
Thanks for the review!

[Sun Set Shots -Demo-]

Penis

You, like Wyld, need to finish your songs lmao. I'm surprised I've never listened to this before... O well, pretty nice man. Also, lol at misspelling typos. Anyways, looking forward to hearing some more stuff whenever you get around to releasing some more hip hop lol.

Druids-Warcry responds:

meh i will get to work on it

[murderous wayz]

As Flash said

You do need to improve the sound quality here. The bass is really distorted, almost to the point where it ruins the song. I don't mind the bells, but the bass and drums need to be brought down to avoid this distortion man. Some better mixing and this will be really good

Dre-17 responds:

ey, thx man. look out for my next submission

[[DX] Final Battle]

This sounds like it belong in video games

Unfortunately, those really long notes are a bit too loud and add a monotonous feel to the whole intro. I love the drum pattern, but maybe make it heavier if it's about a large battle. There's nothing really bad about this, it just really needs to be polished. Good ideas though.

dx5231 responds:

thanks. I usually go well on drums, and not so good on the rest of the song. Maybe a little more of pratice will help me out. Adding some effects on the drums would add a "heavier" feeling to it, I've done it on a music I did (but didn't submit it to newgrounds, it was a test).
My FL studio version isn't the paid one, so I can't save songs. That's frustrating. So I can see what people think I should improve, so I won't make the same things on my next song. If I find another music making software I might use it, or just get the paid version of FL somehow haha
About the intro, yeah, I could make it better, I didn't really like the way it turned out.

[Asdem]

Like the drums

But the key patterns have a lot of wrong notes. Sorry man, but the dissonance isn't really working here. Fix those up and this might be a good track.

Gforce45 responds:

I was using a purposefully out of tune piano but the main focus was on the piano so I guess I kinda failed. Thanks for the review.

[PA - Massive War]

Heavy shit

I'm loving this. Been listening to it every couple of days or so. It's pretty intense. I may end up using this one man. Good work

protcentA responds:

thx ya