Blasphem-E's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Taal Se Taal]

Indian hip hop!

I'm not really feeling the kick in this. I love the melodies though. Good work with the samples, but as I said, try changing the kick, I think that would help tremendously.

SEVEREDSINZ responds:

I dont get it. Whats wrong with the kick?

[Westnyle - Crazy]

Good shit man.

Again, I'm liking the flow in this. Keep it up man. sweet beat.

[Aztec 187]

rofl

You haven't gotten any better than when we called you garbage. I'll give you a 3 for the beat. An additional 1 because you actually managed to rhyme this time. You lyrics are still horrible though.

[Game Over -187-]

Some crazy shit here

Pretty sweet. Only suggestion I have is double layering the snares with something a bit more intense. Something about this song just screams for a heavy snare to me. Great work though, love the synths

[Take on me rap (Working T]

As others have said

The lyrics are solid. The beat is well sampled. You just need to feel the beat and add some emotion to your voice. That and work on your flow a bit more. Keep at it thoug, you'll get it man

[The Hole]

Cool

This thing is fun to freestyle to. I will give i that. I love that clap sound. Sounds like there's a massive crowd clapping, good work with that reverb. Nice synth work as well. It's great, but it feels like it needs something, I can't tell what, to really achieve excellence. Maybe turn those piano notes into chords? But I do like this.

Seanzyboi responds:

Thank your for all of the positive info man.

[Movies (prod. by EmAy)]

Turn up the vocals

Your voice is too quiet in this mix man. turn it up by about 15-20% I'd say. I do like the beat and the flow. Props for the shot at 50. Lyrics are fairly decent, not super amazing, but solid. Also, I think you need to mix the screwed voice in so that it blends with your voice. That would be a really cool effect if it mixed better. Good job overall though.

DocDallas responds:

Thanks a lot.

I'll definitely try out your suggestions, I don't have a final cut yet.

[[A1] HipHop Beat 1]

um...

Man, why am I not hearing a kick near the start? Is it too low or simply not there? Yes I hear it come later, but I'm just curious about the opening. Also, your piano and synths didn't really seem to mix that well. Change up your bass synth as well. After a couple of minutes it gets headache inducing. Honestly, there is some potential here, it just needs to be seriously cleaned up and certain areas need to be rewritten (.i.e. the areas where you have a melody and counter melody that seem completely oblivious of each other.)

Arkell responds:

theres no kick jus a bassline

[~EnV~Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix)]

Envy's greatest song of all time!

Envy man, you are such a one hit wonder! I want this song to have my babies! Rofl. In all seriousness, as much as you hate this song, it is solid man.

Envy responds:

>8(

[~|| Let me share my pain]

Well..

Lol, I'm going to be honest man, ever since I heard the song dog cherry, I haven't liked that opening choir note with that choir lmao.

On a serious note, this is pretty cool. Love the strings you have in this. And other than that opening note, I loved the choir. I would have had the snares just a tad louder though. Also, in the intro, it would have been nice to have a secondary supporting bass synth, just to add to the full dark feeling if you know what I mean.

Just curious here, but how does it sound when you replace the shaker with a clean hat hit? I think it might work if you find the right one.

Keep it up man.

T-Free responds:

I'll work on the track soon. Thank you, Wyze-Stingray.^^