Blasphem-E's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hip-Hop]

Scratch beats should be in old school

There is some potential in this. I do like the drums in this, although the snare should be a bit louder. However, I wasn't really feeling the bass line or that piano at the end. Maybe rethink those patterns? The scratching though is quite cool and well done.

GoldbloodedDragon responds:

The "piano" at the end is still bass.
I just used BooBass.

Though, I'll try to fix the snare.
Thanks for the review!

[Sun Set Shots -Demo-]

Penis

You, like Wyld, need to finish your songs lmao. I'm surprised I've never listened to this before... O well, pretty nice man. Also, lol at misspelling typos. Anyways, looking forward to hearing some more stuff whenever you get around to releasing some more hip hop lol.

Druids-Warcry responds:

meh i will get to work on it

[murderous wayz]

As Flash said

You do need to improve the sound quality here. The bass is really distorted, almost to the point where it ruins the song. I don't mind the bells, but the bass and drums need to be brought down to avoid this distortion man. Some better mixing and this will be really good

Dre-17 responds:

ey, thx man. look out for my next submission

[[DX] Final Battle]

This sounds like it belong in video games

Unfortunately, those really long notes are a bit too loud and add a monotonous feel to the whole intro. I love the drum pattern, but maybe make it heavier if it's about a large battle. There's nothing really bad about this, it just really needs to be polished. Good ideas though.

dx5231 responds:

thanks. I usually go well on drums, and not so good on the rest of the song. Maybe a little more of pratice will help me out. Adding some effects on the drums would add a "heavier" feeling to it, I've done it on a music I did (but didn't submit it to newgrounds, it was a test).
My FL studio version isn't the paid one, so I can't save songs. That's frustrating. So I can see what people think I should improve, so I won't make the same things on my next song. If I find another music making software I might use it, or just get the paid version of FL somehow haha
About the intro, yeah, I could make it better, I didn't really like the way it turned out.

[B.O.B.-Haters Everywhere]

Just listened to this

Solid, I don't know what the hell theglockadyle is talking about. How's your bro doing now?

[KA-RIB - We The Illest]

good

Flow is on point and lyrics are fairly decent. It could use a bit more delivery and the vocals need to be a tiny bit louder, but other than that this is good work man. Keep it up

[Another Shore]

As I said in vent,

Great song. I've never heard it before, but I'll have to go looking through the old games for it. Love the piano playing.

[Megaman Track]

A GREAT TRACK..RUINED!!

I honestly still can't believe Rihanna ruined Numa Numa. But anyways, sweet sample. Cyrez the AVGN sampler. Sounds pretty accurate to me?

[Gameshark]

Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Teehee. Love the binary reference lmao. Flow is good, could be tightened up a little bit, but it's not a problem by any stretch of the imagination. The whole line of "by grinding, ... a rapper is a historical finding, I'm rhyming" wasn't really working. That voice lift thing didn't sound too great. Although I loved the rest of that verse. Good work boys

[Asdem]

Like the drums

But the key patterns have a lot of wrong notes. Sorry man, but the dissonance isn't really working here. Fix those up and this might be a good track.

Gforce45 responds:

I was using a purposefully out of tune piano but the main focus was on the piano so I guess I kinda failed. Thanks for the review.