Pretty cool
Doesn't really give me a betrayal vibe at all, but o well. Pretty nice beat here. That bass groove is pretty killer. My only issue is I wasn't a huge fan of that snare.
Pretty cool
Doesn't really give me a betrayal vibe at all, but o well. Pretty nice beat here. That bass groove is pretty killer. My only issue is I wasn't a huge fan of that snare.
Idk I get feeling like I was a spy that was just betrayed and I don't know who to trust and I'm on the run. lol. Sorry you don't like the snare, to me it sounds really ill.
Thanks on the bass too, took me a while to work it out. Weird notes that are hard to fit together right... lol anyway, thanks and peace.
Very Dilla-esque
Can't think of any way to critique it. Great beat.
Thank you kind sir!
Pretty cool
I definitely like that bass man. Pretty ill. Nice, laid back beat you have here man. I'll see if I can drop something on it.
Glad you like it. I'm interested to see what you can spit over it.
Good shit man
Good shit
thank ya
wtf?
Speaking only on that intro: WTF?
Yeah...that intro LOL. Why a 9 Wyze?? No 10? LOL I live my LIFE for 10's...now I must go hang myself...be back later!
Really?
Internal mic? Really? Crazy dude.
As for the song, was ill. Both of you killed this (you and haywire)
absolutely. thanks man i appreciate it
Here goes
Heads up, I'm going to be a harsh judge for everyone in this comp. Although I will 10 every entry.
Lyrics: 8: You're pretty much flossing. I know it's hard when there's nothing on this dude, but you have to at least make it more personal then this. Maybe pull a DZK and call him out for not having anything?
Delivery: 4: You're getting better man.
Style: 3: Again, too impersonal. Your flow comes off in a couple of places as well.
Total: 15
Here goes
Heads up, I'm going to be a harsh judge for everyone in this comp. Although I will 10 every entry.
Lyrics: 12: This is a cool one, obviously I love the lyricism.
Delivery: 5: felt a bit too distorted for me, other then that it's ill.
Style: 6: you already know
Overall: 23. This is easily the best battle of the contest. Remember you will take a 7 point hit out of the 90 total for being late.
Well
Seeing as how I don't judge this one, I have only one thing to say. Did you really just right "sammitch" Steve?
Also, my offer is for these people to join in the second round, nothing more will be accepted for the first
lol yes i *wrote* "sammitch", and... uhhh, hhrrrmm, what kind of sense does it make to allow someone who was DQ'd/forfeited/refused to compete in the first round to join in on the second round? like, if i don't bother to submit anything for the second round, does that mean i'll get to join in on the third? or is that when you change the format and rules... again?
this is really getting to be on some clownshoe-type shit now.
Ok Here goes
Heads up, I'm going to be a harsh judge for everyone in this comp. Although I will 10 every entry.
Lyrics: 6: Really, no hard hitting punches, no crazy rhyme schemes, pretty generic.
Delivery: 3: When you come in, I keep thinking you're starting off with shit talk, it usually takes me a few seconds to realize you're rapping. You can make this voice work for certain types of tracks, but not this one.
Style: 3 eh... flow was off a bit, it sounded like you were talking the whole time. Really, this wasn't well done man.
Total: 12
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