Good
You've got a good feeling of what you're doing.
I like those melodies, and they work well together. Like that snare, but that kick just seems off to me. It doesn't have enough punch to cut through the business of the beat, and you definitely need your kick to have some power. It also feels a bit clubby to me, which doesn't work with the pianos and other instruments you've got going.
Other than that, solid beat