Blasphem-E's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Westnyle - Action]

Sick

Great track man. Good lyrics, great flow and delivery and all that.

My only complaint is that at the end, the speaking outro is louder than the hook right before it. That just feels a bit off to me. Other than that, amazing stuff.

westnyle responds:

yea i winged it and kinda rushed it after the first verse tbh.. i gotta break that bad habit lol

[Gasmasq - Such Sights]

Good shit for sure

"She might find without me sex just won't be the same" Little cocky there eh? lol

Ok, only thing I can find here, that echo you did at the end is um... how do I put this... Bad. Try using either an actual echo effect or delay rather than just repeating your voice. I think that would sound better.

Great flow, good sound all that stuff. One problem with T-free's beats for an MC is finding the right vocal volume. Because his beats are so loud, you want to push your voice up a lot, but you managed to avoid that it seems. In fact, once again, I think your vocals should be a tad higher.

Gasmasq responds:

In response to the first line, she's the one telling me that even after we break up she's going to make me cheat on whoever I'm with cuz she loves my dick that much. But maybe that's TMI?

The echo: Yeah, I'm recording in Audacity, which I'm not accustomed to (damn GarageBand lol) so I'm still figuring everything out.

Volume: Again, I'm in Audacity, so when I amp the vox, I don't want to go over 0 db, but I really don't like hard-limiting either so I've been turning up the track volume which only moves in increments of 3 lol. I'll get it.

Thanks Wyze. Always love your reviews.

[Gasmasq - My Friend]

Good shit

I'm feeling this shit for sure. I've been there. Dumb fucks, try to help em and they spit in your face. So I'm past my wits end with most of them. Don't even talk to a lot of em anymore. But fuck it man, you did awesome at this. Seems like everybody who uses this beat comes up with some amazing shit.

On a side note, get at me on MSN or some shit, I've got a couple of tracks I think you may be interested in getting on.

[Put a G-had on you!]

haha

I believe this is a classic "God Damnit Ashley" moment..

Druids-Warcry responds:

classic and i keeps it classy

[Big Red - Amen]

Nice

"Why can't you let me pretend I have some clothes on?" ... Lines like that don't do the rest of the song justice man. You've got a great sound, and your flow is nice, but you need to cut off lines like that.

Beyond that, the only other thing I'm going to say is that you should turn up your mic about 10%

BigRed responds:

I'm still at the phase with rapping where I see everything as merely practice, so I just kinda let songs flow out and then I'm done with them. Once I've got a better set up and production skills I'll start heavily editing and refining the words I speak. Also, I always turn the mic down because when it's louder I hear it's lack of quality more, haha. Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it!

[Beezlebub(NOT FINAL)]

My thoughts

As I told you, the quality is complete shit. You need to turn down your mic sensitivity, a LOT!

Your flow actually regressed on this one as well. You seemed to be getting better, and this better than your old shit, but your last few songs have had much better flow than this.

You put too much emphasis on the word fuck, especially at the start.
Chop and screw bit was pretty cool though

Broken-Needle responds:

lol, glad you liked it, I'ma re-do it soon,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[For NewGrounds (Famous No]

O my Gawd!

The pure beauty. This is so deep. This beat is so hardcore, but InG is just SO DEEP!

Druids-Warcry responds:

deep like a cock in an asshole

[Taint of Wyarm]

Yarr!

For some reason those piano notes reminded me of goldeneye... This is quite dark, so you know I'm loving it. I think the kick needs to be bigger. It's just not quite where it needs to be, especially with that snare.

Overall: Good shit

Druids-Warcry responds:

well your ugly with your golden eye! (homo) haha nah i need to turn that snare down IMO thanks for the review mike

[:: Misirlou ::]

Listen up

Apparently, your ability to take constructive criticism is non-existent, so let's make this as blunt as possible: Learn to fucking EQ. I'm getting a fair chunk of distortion, and I don't just mean the intentional type.

While the idea is a good one, you need to bring down the volume levels. I don't care if you claim you mastered it to 0dB, if most people are saying it's not eq'd right, odds are, we are right. AFter all, we gain nothing by lieing to you

InvertedScrotum responds:

You're an indecent faggot.