Blasphem-E's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[WS - 2 Step]

aw shit

Sick shit. You guys killed straight up and down the track. only issue is Sham's dubs. Other than that, way to kill this

[Dirty War]

Sick

I'm definitely a fan of this. Good to see some angry conscientiousness. Only suggestion: turn up your vocals a tad bit more. Other than that, this is perfect

Gasmasq responds:

Figured you'd like it Wyze. Of course, the only reason I keep my voc's low is so I can keep getting 9's from you. lol.

Actually, I'ma try to get Billy to EQ me correctly...

[On Tha Block]

Decent

Pretty good beat, feels a bit simple, but not horribly so.

Decent instrumentation, although it would be nice if you could make the piano a bit more ominous.

Only other thing is that the kick sounds a bit too clubby I think for the rest of the song.

Other than that though, this is really great. Keep it up

[F-777 (WF1) - M.O.I Remix]

Okay wtf

I understand that you meant for moi to be moments of inspiration, but it's also the french word for "me", so I was confused as hell, thought you were remixing yourself... Fucker.. LMAO

On to the song itself, I do think that the part right after the intro break should have a kick pattern going on.

I'm going to be honest here man, I was trying to review this as it went on, but I think the whole thing has pretty much the same problem. Being so close to a classical song, you expect it to follow a couple of the rules of orchestral. In a lot of this it just feels like it needs room to breathe. This is ESPECIALLY true from 1:40 - 1:54.

Don't get me wrong, it still sounds great, but I think it could use a bit more breathing room in a few places. Still, great job gentlemen.

wyldfyre1 responds:

breathing is for pussys LOL. Nah, i know what you mean. Feels like there's alot in the song. Though at 1:40 to 1:54 that is a breathing point so i'm not sure i understand ^_~. Anyway thanks for the review buddy!

[Burly - Winter of the Hea]

Beautiful

Normally I like larger words, but the simplicity in this amplifies the message, so great job on that.

All right, technically, this is good, hell, this is great. But it feels wrong to review this technically. So all I'm going to say is the following: I may not have known your father, but I would still wager anything that you've made him proud. Amazing stuff man

Burly responds:

Glad I could go outside your preferred tastes. I'm honored to get a review like this from you, cuz I know it's not often you do them nice, lol.

[(untittle song of no name]

Very nice

Overall this is great, hopefully Spawn resurrects himself soon and you 3 can finish it.

Only a couple of small gripes here, I think that crash is a bit too heavy for the rest of what's going on. Yes, I am criticizing Spawn's drums, yes, it is the first time, and likely the last lmao.

The other thing I'd like to see is a greater violin line. Would be awesome

Druids-Warcry responds:

Yeah the crash was a bit off but Im was not going to be the one to fuck with this drums you know spawn gets... Um Don did the Violin part so take that up with him
I did the piano part.

Over all man thans for the review it helps but sadly i dont think this song will ever go any where.

[Up side down Kake BN edition]

Well...

Your flow is improving, but it still needs a LOT of work. This is too slow a track for my style, but whatever. Rhymes seemed mostly 1 syllabic, try to add multies some more, especially at this speed.

Keep improving man

Broken-Needle responds:

huh? dude this track has the most multies in a single track i've made to date... but thanks 4 the review
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[-=One More Chance=- (Preview)]

Good stuff

As mentioned, this does seem to cackle a bit, but still, damn. I am feeling this shit, and that technical issue doesn't really retract from it at all. You mind if I use this?

[Burly - Don't Just Listen]

Good but expected more

Okay, as always, you did well lyrically and your flow was solid. However, I have a couple of small issues with his. That "felt" repeating really didn't help the track at all in my opinion.

The other thing, is I would honestly like to hear you sing the entire hook in the same way you did the last couple of lines. I.e, the full singing sound in the lines
"where did my home go
where did it go"
and
"it's so nice to meet you
my name is hip hop"

Still, despite these minor drawbacks, you did great man. Keep up

Burly responds:

Haha, thanks for raising the bar for me. It's my first singing track in a looong time. My singing isn't all that great yet, so I like to keep it to a minimal lol. I'm new to mixing still also, the echo was just an experiment (what would you do at that part)? Thanks for the honest review dude. Ttyl.

[Rebel Yell(Alabama Theme Song)]

Hell yes

Good shit, nice to hear you being more versatile for sure. I know it's already been touched on, but I'm going to say it again, you need more energy in this. When you get that in here (aka finish that studio) this will be mofucking lava. Until then, you have to settle for microwave hot. lmao

NimbusTheGeneral responds:

It's all good fam, when it gets re-recorded I'll re-post it as a revised version LOL. Thanks for the review as always fam.

Stay up,

Nimbus The General