Great work man
I'm talking to you on MSN so I won't bother leaving a comprehensive review.
Great work man
I'm talking to you on MSN so I won't bother leaving a comprehensive review.
Your face is a comprehensive review. XD
Not bad
Beat is pretty cool, but as previously mentioned, would be better if it had melodies and counter melodies in it.
As for the flow, not bad, it's not horribly off, just needs to be tightened up in some parts.
You're probably a lot better by now though, I'd like to hear something more recent lol.
Good work man, keep it up.
Thanks man, its all been a learning experience. Practice practice practice...
Dude, haven't heard from Phade in a while
Good shit gentleman. Spawn, I'm still disappointed in you for reasons not at all relevant here. You know what I mean.
Good lines and flow. hope we don't have to wait another decade to hear from Phade again.
Excuse me going through shit and not being able to laugh so hard that I'll piss myself on camera D:
Hmm...
Very nice. You definitely made this better. I can't find any more flaws in it beyond what I told you last time around lol. Great work man. hit me up on MSN or AIM sometime.
Great, thank you very much, Wyze-Stingray! :D
Good stuff
Interesting story. Fairly deep stuff. Overall a good track man. Keep it up and congrats on top 5
Not bad at all
Good shit man. Honestly, I wasn't really feeling the choir in this at all. The idea is a good one, but that particular choir sound wasn't working well. I liked the bass, although a bit of variation might have worked well too.
Overall though, nice dark feel
ahh nobody likes teh choirs :'(
as for the bass, true - a bit of variation wouldnt hurt, but its function was more rhythmic than melodical so i'd personally keep it the way it is :D
thanks for the review man, glad a talented hip hop artist likes this 1
Good sound man.
I can vibe to this for a while. I really can't think of much to say. It doesn't sound hugely wrong or anything, it just isn't making a huge impression. It is a good beat though. Can't wait for the finished project
if i had the right sounds i think it would be much better, but i don't have the kind of money to buy a decent sound kit :P
thanks for your insight.. first review, even for the first preview.
Nice
This has a really cool vibe in it. It sounds smooth, but almost with a bit of an underedge to it if that makes any sense, regardless, I like it. Not so sure I liked the strumming acoustic at 3:20, but that's ok. It works later when it's in the background though
Good track
I like this track. Honestly though, I'm not really feeling the hook. Tell your producer to put a bit more personality into his singing. However, the verses are all great. Love the lyrics man.
thanks man. i appreciate the review
good stuff
Will be awesome with a kickass bass line. Can't wait man.
hell yea shit gon slam
thanks man
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