So, quick bet
What do you suppose the odds are that somebody will go "Man wtf?! This is Eminem and Jay-Z, who's royce da 5'9?" lol.
As normal, you've got that crazy spit and you're original as fuck. I know you said you didn't care to hear it, but I think your emphatic words are popping a bit too much in the first verse. It's a small thing though, and doesn't really detract from the very much. I'm just in the reviewing state of mind so I'm looking for the most minute things right now lol. Honestly though, you murdered it and your boy was kickass too.
Hit me up on AIM, MSN or better yet, hop on vent man. Lol.