As Flash said
You do need to improve the sound quality here. The bass is really distorted, almost to the point where it ruins the song. I don't mind the bells, but the bass and drums need to be brought down to avoid this distortion man. Some better mixing and this will be really good
ey, thx man. look out for my next submission
This sounds like it belong in video games
Unfortunately, those really long notes are a bit too loud and add a monotonous feel to the whole intro. I love the drum pattern, but maybe make it heavier if it's about a large battle. There's nothing really bad about this, it just really needs to be polished. Good ideas though.
thanks. I usually go well on drums, and not so good on the rest of the song. Maybe a little more of pratice will help me out. Adding some effects on the drums would add a "heavier" feeling to it, I've done it on a music I did (but didn't submit it to newgrounds, it was a test).
My FL studio version isn't the paid one, so I can't save songs. That's frustrating. So I can see what people think I should improve, so I won't make the same things on my next song. If I find another music making software I might use it, or just get the paid version of FL somehow haha
About the intro, yeah, I could make it better, I didn't really like the way it turned out.
Just listened to this
Solid, I don't know what the hell theglockadyle is talking about. How's your bro doing now?
good
Flow is on point and lyrics are fairly decent. It could use a bit more delivery and the vocals need to be a tiny bit louder, but other than that this is good work man. Keep it up
As I said in vent,
Great song. I've never heard it before, but I'll have to go looking through the old games for it. Love the piano playing.
A GREAT TRACK..RUINED!!
I honestly still can't believe Rihanna ruined Numa Numa. But anyways, sweet sample. Cyrez the AVGN sampler. Sounds pretty accurate to me?
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Teehee. Love the binary reference lmao. Flow is good, could be tightened up a little bit, but it's not a problem by any stretch of the imagination. The whole line of "by grinding, ... a rapper is a historical finding, I'm rhyming" wasn't really working. That voice lift thing didn't sound too great. Although I loved the rest of that verse. Good work boys
Like the drums
But the key patterns have a lot of wrong notes. Sorry man, but the dissonance isn't really working here. Fix those up and this might be a good track.
I was using a purposefully out of tune piano but the main focus was on the piano so I guess I kinda failed. Thanks for the review.
Loving the G-Funk
Classic west coast feel ftw. Good job man. Ya, it could be longer but if it isn't working, it isn't working. Great work
Holy damn this is dramatic
Excellent work. I don't think I've heard the original, think I'll have to give it a listen now. This is amazing
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