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Drums need to come in earlier

Not a bad melody, but a bit too repetitive. Not too bad though.

Feniiku responds:

Thanks for your review, I'll bear in mind the drum suggestion for next time ^_^

Not bad

It feels like a mourning song at the start. Is that a violin at 15 seconds? Regardless of what it is, I liked it. Really well done there. I'm not a huge fan of those high hits that come in at 1:09, but to each their own.

erdicolpan responds:

no not violin its french horn

Bass this thing up some

Needs some serious bass. Other than that it isn't bad

Nice

Sounding awesome as usual. Only thing I'd like to see is even more bass. I know it's already a lot, but this is one of those beats that can't have too much bass.

Try changing your instruments.

It does sound like it would be great if it weren't for an annoying sound quality problem. I do like the guitar in here, but that synth (I guess it's a synth) line that runs through needs to be changed to another instrument. Other than that, great job.

Sorry man

Those drums are doing nothing for me. Try bringing those levels down. Also, the strings need some work. This has some potential, but it will require a serious overhaul

I'm guessing you're going for less is more?

The big picture: this song definitely gives off the effect I think you were going for.

The smaller pictures: I think you did most of the little things right. The high chorus was a great idea. I think there is just a touch too much silence from 54-59. Something needs to be added there. Also, try moving away from the synthy sounds for this. I think if you could get a more realistic sounding instrument instead of whatever that is that comes in at 13 seconds and then randomly throughout the song. Also, I think you should change your instrumentation at 49 seconds, try changing that line to something that stands out on it's own rather than sounding like multiple instruments.

Hope that helps you make this great track better

DJ-OverLord responds:

ok thnx very much listening and reviewing, I'll Update This track in a While, 'cause you're right there are some things missing, and I will do something about That Virtual Instrument,
The only problem at the moment is, I've got a lack of money:(
But I'll Fix that when I've got some more money.

Really Thnx very much for your review, I find this very Helpful;)

Pretty sweet

Strings need to be brought out more, I love the brass though.

MaestroRage responds:

I didn't really want the strings to be prominent in this song since they are very repetitive. It would start gettings very dull if they took too much of the attention. Thank you for your feedback however, I will experiment further with those strings.

I'm glad you liked it, thanks again for the review!

Nice and laid back

Great work with this. I love the piano. Overall it's a pretty smooth track. My only suggestion would be to increase the volume on those drums a bit.

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Screw textbooks. This is how one goes about getting schooled in the truth. Great track

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Mike @Blasphem-E

Age 33, Male

BC , Canada

Joined on 8/7/08

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