I'll give you credit for trying
It's somewhat close. You can tell it's different, but not hugely so.
I'll give you credit for trying
It's somewhat close. You can tell it's different, but not hugely so.
Pretty cool
The drums need to be changed up, too standard. It's a pretty cool synth loop you have with this one. I do like the volume on the bass synth as well, even if it doesn't mix in too well. My only other issue with it is that it stays a bit too similar all the way through. Still a good track though.
yeah i agree it is pretty repetitive
its actually quite hard to hear some of the synths i have running through this one, they get a little drowned out
Reminds me of mario kart
menu music. Good sound. I think the bass sticks out a bit too much for this sort of track, but it's not horrible
mhhh yes...probably you are right about the bass...unfortunately I love bass too much, and I add it everywhere :P LOL!
thank you for your review :)
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Try adding a string line
from around the end of this on for a bit. Also, turn up your bass a bit. As for the piano part, moving past what you have, my only suggestion for the next bit would be to keep repeating it with a few minor variations each time. Great job so far though man.
it was just a demo to go off. its nothing but a shit loop. nothing i do comes out good and it sounds like all the same shit that i have made in the past
Nice line
Short, but what you did have here was nicely done. Try to elongate it and use a few more instruments.
yeah, i did this over the night, so it was quickly made. Perhaps I'll try to work more on this one ^^ Thanks for the review and the "8" :D Its much appritiated ^^
Really cool vibe
Leaves a nice happy feeling inside. 5'd it. It's a bit too simple to get the 10, but I'm still really loving it. Also, it loops obscenely well.
Very nice name
Is that a phone number? But ya, fairly decent song, a bit too much on the random side with some of the silences. Although each section does sound fairly decent.
lol yeah its pretty random but i think i'd rather call it 'dumb' because it is fairly dumb as you must admit it is. the whole number thing is the result of a pattern on your keyboard. press the far left number which is 1 then the far right which is 0 and then left again which is 2 then so on and so forth. anyways ty for review.
Ominous beginning giving way to a crazy synth line
Amazingly well done. I really like the synth melody you created with this. The background strings, especially at about 1:30 are really nice. The only thing I can think of is maybe bring those out a little bit more? Great song though
Yeah, it's actually just a pad from atmosphere tweaked out a bit. I brought all the lows away from it because it was squashing out the bass. I'll try to boost the mids and highs on it. Thank you L:D
Good track man
The synths are pretty sweet man. It gets a little bit on the repetitive side but it isn't too bad. Overall good job though
yeah i see what you mean man, its it Repetvtive, i really should really work on it some more
I'm liking this thing's feel
Sounds pretty laid back but at the same time it manages to keep moving. I love that piano part, even if only listening to that would get repetitive. The harmonicas were a great touch as well, although I think a bit more vibrato on it would be amazing.
You have good cause to be proud man, great job
yeah it get Repetitve at points but you dont want to switch it up if people might be spitting on it thanks for the feed back man
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