Nice
Full thing should be great. Album should be really cool, I may jump on that, if I can figure out how to make that kind of music lmao. I like those flutes man.
Good demo.
Nice
Full thing should be great. Album should be really cool, I may jump on that, if I can figure out how to make that kind of music lmao. I like those flutes man.
Good demo.
Hey, thanks for the review bro!
Easily your best
This is by far your best track yet. Great mic precense, great flow and solid lyrics. Well done. Good hook too
Thanks mang. Got my shit on lock down now fo sho. Thanks for the review.
good
Loved the build of this early on, quite soothing. Then it starts to do some more interesting stuff. That synth at 2:32 is pure pleasure to my ears lmao. Problem is, I didn't like the second synth you added in at 3:04. I don't know what it is, but that line wasn't really doing much for me. Then it calms down again, very nice strings in there. Overall, great track.
I will probably cut off the 3:04' sound, after repeated listening by me and my friend you were right, this sound actually don't fit with the rest.
Thank you dude.
very nice
Ok, for the opening part, I love the feel you've got in there, but I'd like more. Here I'm thinking some deep brass or dark strings. That would be amazing. I don't mind the lack of a transition so much - that's what a lot of classical music does. Second part sounds really cool, very upbeat and jovial
wow Jovial i was called that today!
but thanks yeah im trying to make the 1st part longer its going to be long song that drags out to like a 15 mins song or some thing, but you said Deep Brass
WYZE I LOVE YOU!!!!
omg back to work see yeah
I haven't reviewed this?
Wtf? Was sure I had reviewed this. Damn. Anyways, Cool track, you've got 52 reviews already telling you stuff about it, but I'll add my thoughts. I'd like to hear that light snare or clap or whatever it is echoing just like that hat or whatever the supporting perc is.
Love the instrumentation and melody
glad you like it man
Man, I know you've been told about this
This isn't youtube. NG is for original work only. I understand you mashed these, but you don't have the rights to any of the songs, they're held by record labels. This isn't the sort of track that should be put on NG.
well if they are gonna take it down, let em
all right
First things first man, your vocals are WAY to far back in the mix. I can barely hear you, and sure as hell can't make sense out of most of the lyrics. From what I can tell, you both flowed well, but again, I can't make much sense of it with the vocals so far back. Fix that problem and message me please
fixed... sorta.
Did a little eq on it too, but doesnt fix the timing haha. It is what it is i spose.
Not a bad track
Well, this isn't a bad effort considering it's outside of your genre. It's a cool melody. Unfortunately, I think your bass is a bit to distorted given the main part of your song. One more thing, try making the snare MUCH louder. Remember, snares are the lifeblood of any hip hop track. Keep it up though.
Thanks for the input!
Much appreciated. =)
that slayer
Sounds like slayer.. Sorry man, you need a better guitar synth to do this sort of stuff. As Cebster said, the melody itself is good, but the guitar sound isn't that great at all.
Drums are pretty cool though man, although a bit more messing with velocities would have been cool.
the lemons are rotten...
All right
Pretty good man. I think this song overall is a bit too high pitch to make a great beat, but it's still cool. That break at 45 seconds sounded great, as did 56 seconds. Overall, not a bad track at all, just a few parts that seem a bit too high. And man, you sure there's no organ in this? lol. Several parts seriously sound like an organ lmao.
a lot of people are saying its too high pitched, im probably going to end up fixing it up.
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