Blasphem-E's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Collabo yo!(HW)]

Nice

Was fun doing this track. However, I think this hook is a bit messed up. It doesn't sound very great. Would have been better if you just left everyone's hook on there. O well. Great verses by all

MaoDaMighty responds:

Twas fun. Yah I agree that the hook sounds a bit different, but everyone is in it. Thanks for putting your touch into this track, peace dude.

[KTR/WF1 Moments of Inspiration]

Well done

I'm far too tired to leave a comprehensive review, but this is beautiful. Good work gentlemen.

KTRECORDS responds:

Lol, I know how you feel. It was 3:30 am by the time WF1 and I were finally done nit picking the song. Anyways, glad you liked it!

-Jason
KTRECORDS

[The Degradation of Hip-Hop]

Nice

All right, normally I like to leave lengthy reviews about how to improve or what could be better, but right now, all I'm going to say is this: respect.

Keep at it

thirdvii responds:

Thanks for the good words man

[::+Forever Gone+::]

Dude

I know you said feel the piano, but I'm feeling that guitar more. Just me personally. I don't have much to say here other than good work

Mister-Monker responds:

LOl,respect tho. And just on that tip,it isn't a guitar,it's a low key piano ;)

[(WF1) Tranquil Hearts (WIP)]

Strings, seconded

The beauty in the composition is overshadowed by the quality in your sounds. I know how much you like your soundfonts, but I almost think you need to find something better for this song. Either that or run a channel for all sorts of different string instruments and make your ensemble manually.

Your piano work is good as always, but I think you might find that throwing 2 additional layers (1 staccato and 1 a slightly fuller sound) then eqing the combined 3 of them down to slightly above what we get here would work really well.

Flutes until 33 were amazing, but I think after that 4th note you should bring it up to a higher note. I.e. If you currently have C-E-D-C (long note), try doing it C-E-D-C (long note) G (halfway through the C). Whatever the flute note at 36 and 41 seconds is, it sounded slightly off to me, but this may again be due to the quality of instruments you have.

As I told you on MSN, it sounds like the flute player s dieing at 47 seconds. Get that digital player a crash cart, stat!

Get some wind chimes into the end of this man, they'll sound amazing.

Also, if possible, I think a solo, muted trumpet playing a few long notes every 8 measures or so would do wonders.

As Gravey suggested, percussion would be nice with this. But no kits. A combination of timps, soft crashes and even the sound of a heart beat if you can emulate that.

Finally, the cello. Could be a bit bigger, with a darker sound. See if you can put another cello in an octave below that at about 85% the volume. Think that would be great

Hope these ideas help

wyldfyre1 responds:

Hmm this should help big time. LOL I'll end up working on this puppy a bit more when i gets the time.

[~|| Break your chains! [new]]

Good

For once I don't actually mind slayer, so that's a positive. Love that kick, but the snare should be bigger.

Also, you're missing a real bass sound in this. I was expecting to hear it come in when the snare dropped, so that was a small let down.

Still, nice track.

T-Free responds:

Yeah, you're right in all points, I'll work on this song a second time.^^

[[DX] Rage]

all right

I liked the drums in this, although I think you should bring the snare out a bit more. Kicks and hats were done well.

Not so sure I love that bass 1-3-2-1 pattern. It's not bad, but it's not really exceptional either.

Still, this is really bass heavy, quite a treat for the ears to have that much bass put together lol.

dx5231 responds:

Hm.. I'll try to bring out the snare.

Lol @ ear threat.

[Acting Affirmative]

Allright

As I told you on AIM, this is your best flow yet on this site. Good work

Broken-Needle responds:

lol, thanks

[Gasmasq - Another Day]

Nice

Ya man, I like the vibe you're setting with this track.Definitely the type of track to sit back and think on.

Your flow comes off in several places, but you manage to bring it back every time, so that's fine.

By the way, where is the beat from? And if you have an extended version, could you please send me this track with an additional open verse? Would be awesome.

Keep it up man.

Gasmasq responds:

In regard to the beat, check your email.
The artist: check your PMs.

Thanks for the review, but my flow doesn't come off, that's intentional to make you notice the words. :D