Blasphem-E's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Burly - Winter of the Hea]

Beautiful

Normally I like larger words, but the simplicity in this amplifies the message, so great job on that.

All right, technically, this is good, hell, this is great. But it feels wrong to review this technically. So all I'm going to say is the following: I may not have known your father, but I would still wager anything that you've made him proud. Amazing stuff man

Burly responds:

Glad I could go outside your preferred tastes. I'm honored to get a review like this from you, cuz I know it's not often you do them nice, lol.

[(untittle song of no name]

Very nice

Overall this is great, hopefully Spawn resurrects himself soon and you 3 can finish it.

Only a couple of small gripes here, I think that crash is a bit too heavy for the rest of what's going on. Yes, I am criticizing Spawn's drums, yes, it is the first time, and likely the last lmao.

The other thing I'd like to see is a greater violin line. Would be awesome

Druids-Warcry responds:

Yeah the crash was a bit off but Im was not going to be the one to fuck with this drums you know spawn gets... Um Don did the Violin part so take that up with him
I did the piano part.

Over all man thans for the review it helps but sadly i dont think this song will ever go any where.

[Up side down Kake BN edition]

Well...

Your flow is improving, but it still needs a LOT of work. This is too slow a track for my style, but whatever. Rhymes seemed mostly 1 syllabic, try to add multies some more, especially at this speed.

Keep improving man

Broken-Needle responds:

huh? dude this track has the most multies in a single track i've made to date... but thanks 4 the review
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[Burly - Don't Just Listen]

Good but expected more

Okay, as always, you did well lyrically and your flow was solid. However, I have a couple of small issues with his. That "felt" repeating really didn't help the track at all in my opinion.

The other thing, is I would honestly like to hear you sing the entire hook in the same way you did the last couple of lines. I.e, the full singing sound in the lines
"where did my home go
where did it go"
and
"it's so nice to meet you
my name is hip hop"

Still, despite these minor drawbacks, you did great man. Keep up

Burly responds:

Haha, thanks for raising the bar for me. It's my first singing track in a looong time. My singing isn't all that great yet, so I like to keep it to a minimal lol. I'm new to mixing still also, the echo was just an experiment (what would you do at that part)? Thanks for the honest review dude. Ttyl.

[Rebel Yell(Alabama Theme Song)]

Hell yes

Good shit, nice to hear you being more versatile for sure. I know it's already been touched on, but I'm going to say it again, you need more energy in this. When you get that in here (aka finish that studio) this will be mofucking lava. Until then, you have to settle for microwave hot. lmao

NimbusTheGeneral responds:

It's all good fam, when it gets re-recorded I'll re-post it as a revised version LOL. Thanks for the review as always fam.

Stay up,

Nimbus The General

[Westnyle - Action]

Sick

Great track man. Good lyrics, great flow and delivery and all that.

My only complaint is that at the end, the speaking outro is louder than the hook right before it. That just feels a bit off to me. Other than that, amazing stuff.

westnyle responds:

yea i winged it and kinda rushed it after the first verse tbh.. i gotta break that bad habit lol

[Gasmasq - Such Sights]

Good shit for sure

"She might find without me sex just won't be the same" Little cocky there eh? lol

Ok, only thing I can find here, that echo you did at the end is um... how do I put this... Bad. Try using either an actual echo effect or delay rather than just repeating your voice. I think that would sound better.

Great flow, good sound all that stuff. One problem with T-free's beats for an MC is finding the right vocal volume. Because his beats are so loud, you want to push your voice up a lot, but you managed to avoid that it seems. In fact, once again, I think your vocals should be a tad higher.

Gasmasq responds:

In response to the first line, she's the one telling me that even after we break up she's going to make me cheat on whoever I'm with cuz she loves my dick that much. But maybe that's TMI?

The echo: Yeah, I'm recording in Audacity, which I'm not accustomed to (damn GarageBand lol) so I'm still figuring everything out.

Volume: Again, I'm in Audacity, so when I amp the vox, I don't want to go over 0 db, but I really don't like hard-limiting either so I've been turning up the track volume which only moves in increments of 3 lol. I'll get it.

Thanks Wyze. Always love your reviews.

[Put a G-had on you!]

haha

I believe this is a classic "God Damnit Ashley" moment..

Druids-Warcry responds:

classic and i keeps it classy

[Big Red - Amen]

Nice

"Why can't you let me pretend I have some clothes on?" ... Lines like that don't do the rest of the song justice man. You've got a great sound, and your flow is nice, but you need to cut off lines like that.

Beyond that, the only other thing I'm going to say is that you should turn up your mic about 10%

BigRed responds:

I'm still at the phase with rapping where I see everything as merely practice, so I just kinda let songs flow out and then I'm done with them. Once I've got a better set up and production skills I'll start heavily editing and refining the words I speak. Also, I always turn the mic down because when it's louder I hear it's lack of quality more, haha. Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it!