My thoughts
As I told you, the quality is complete shit. You need to turn down your mic sensitivity, a LOT!
Your flow actually regressed on this one as well. You seemed to be getting better, and this better than your old shit, but your last few songs have had much better flow than this.
You put too much emphasis on the word fuck, especially at the start.
Chop and screw bit was pretty cool though
lol, glad you liked it, I'ma re-do it soon,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
O my Gawd!
The pure beauty. This is so deep. This beat is so hardcore, but InG is just SO DEEP!
deep like a cock in an asshole
Yarr!
For some reason those piano notes reminded me of goldeneye... This is quite dark, so you know I'm loving it. I think the kick needs to be bigger. It's just not quite where it needs to be, especially with that snare.
Overall: Good shit
well your ugly with your golden eye! (homo) haha nah i need to turn that snare down IMO thanks for the review mike
Listen up
Apparently, your ability to take constructive criticism is non-existent, so let's make this as blunt as possible: Learn to fucking EQ. I'm getting a fair chunk of distortion, and I don't just mean the intentional type.
While the idea is a good one, you need to bring down the volume levels. I don't care if you claim you mastered it to 0dB, if most people are saying it's not eq'd right, odds are, we are right. AFter all, we gain nothing by lieing to you
You're an indecent faggot.
hrm
Haha, I remember doing a really shitty vocal job on the original, fun times, fun times indeed.
This one's pretty good, but there's a slight clash. The drums are intense, so they should be used with a heavier track. Then you have your piano which is a real mellow sound. Those two just aren't perfect for each other. My recommendation? Change the piano to a distorted guitar once the beat drops. That and give that rave synth a larger presence (say through a chorus effect).
In response to Teddygram, I have to say, hip hop is more than just music, it is a mindset. It is whatever you want it to be, therefore, this fits in hip hop.
good work and keep it up
tyvm :)
Quick comment
Word of advice, don't pan the violins quite so far, they just feel a bit awkward that far to the side. Composition wise this is nice, but it feels a bit thin in the parts that are supposed to be full, maybe try layering your instruments a bit more? Good work though
I know exactly what you mean and I wish i could layer alot more instruments but im forced to use limited resources. All I have on my side is a free version of finale notepad and a free recorder. I cant use more than 8 instruments in a single composition and nothing I write can be longer than 2:00. Its tough but i hope one day ill have some better tools on my side. I could do a lot more :P
what the fuck
How did I not notice you upload this? We talked on this one a while ago but I'm still going to say nice job, especially because you practically never spit.
well i think its cus i snuck it on yeah, didnt tell no one i was hoping it go unseen, the spit is shit but the beat is fire
Cool stuff
Wow, no reviews yet? That's some dumb shit right there.
You're doing the same thing I do in my freestyles: start using words as filler. In this case you're using "fuck" as a filler to think a lot. I personally tend to use the word everybody a lot when I freestyle. I have no idea why.
Still, decent freestyle, flow, delivery and sound were all great.
Yeah, I guess we all have our specific filler word.
Thanks for popping my review cherry on this one Wyze. Took long enough, eh? lol.
Snare, agreed
Heavier snare would be awesome. Hit me up for some drum samples.
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