Killer solo
Vocals are pretty sweet. I think the scream needs more intensity. Not roughness or a change in tone, but it feel like it's lacking a bit in intensity. As I said though, I love that guitar solo. Great work overall man, just work on the scream intensity.
Listening back, I think I can hear what you're talking about.
It's just an endurance thing; one of the many things I need to improve on.
Glad you like that solo. I wrote this song (the guitar parts, anyway) about 3 years ago, and have recorded it probably 10 times in those 3 years, and I can definitively say that this is the first time I have felt like I got it right.
Thanks a lot for the review, and keep an eye out for the next part, hopefully it'll be done in a week or two.
Metal! \m/
Depressing story
Great piece, depressing ass story. Overall a good job though
it's not my story but I do agree it's deliciously depressing :D! Thanks for the review, i'm glad you liked it.
Damnit, Merc beat me to it
Man, I'd love to kill this, too bad Merc asked first lol. Great work. Even with the lack of formatting it sounds pretty sweet. Definitely different from your normal style, but it still sounds awesome man. Great job.
haha sorry about that man. But yeah, I kinda moved from my normal style for this one. Glad you liked it
Um....
Pretty standard techno drums, sadly, they're probably the best part of this. Whatever that is at :51 seconds, please take it out. Sorry, but it isn't working at all. Up until that point, the track was half decent, but that was a major turn off. I can see from 1:25 that Pachebel's Canon has indeed made it to techno. At least, the Cello line has. Sorry for the poor review, but this song does need quite a bit of shoring up before it can be truly great.
yeh, i agree with the track at 51. I just needed something to fill the space. ill keep that in mind.
and i had no idea the bass line was so similar to Canon Dx
i just made it to go along with the main tune.
and thanks heaps for actually listening to the whole song before writing a review. i really appreciate the constructive criticism :]
Good
I honestly hate club style hip hop. Nothing to do with the instrumentals, everything to do with the weak rappers who usually use it. Therefore, I may be a bit biased in this review. Anyways...
I honestly have no idea how you managed to do it, but you had the one line going right through the entire song but it doesn't get repetitive whatsoever. It likely has something to do with the other melodies you place over top. Great bass and the snares are well done. However, I would have liked to see the kicks be a bit louder in the parts where you have several melodies going.
Great work.
thanks a lot man. I understand what you mean about hating club tracks, most the rappers on them are wack. Glad you liked the track though
Ya, definite improvement
Well, I loved Crushed Soul and I love this as well. My only complaint is that the drums aren't as strong as they should be. Other than that minor thing, great track.
Thank you very much for your review!
Soon I will upload a better version of this, with stronger drums and maybe it will not be as repetitive as this.^^
Gun shots are becoming a pet peeve of mine
Nothing against you with that bit, but lately gun shot sounds have been starting to get annoying to me. You do have a fairly decent flow, although I'm going to agree with some of the criticism about you and say that I'd like to hear some different topics from you. Good beat by G-Styles.
Good review.
Nice
As usual, high quality work from you. I love the drums in this. Overall this track meshes really well. Great job
I really appreciate the review, thanks a lot dude
Really well looped
Nice track. Would work great as background noise for a game. That flute at :21 for some reason reminded me of Zelda for some reason
haha its all about zelda! =)
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