Blasphem-E's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[MMX22A03:Mavericks' Last Stand]

Nice

Ya, you should redo those drums. Bring them out a bit more. The snare in particular is mainly coming out as static. Good synths though

EdgeHypermatter responds:

They sound like static because they ARE static. What you're hearing is the NES's noise channel, and in NES music, it's used for percussion. And in my opinion, if the percussion doesn't sound like that, then it isn't true 8-bit music.

[Skydiving]

Pretty cool

Doesn't really remind me of skydiving at all, but it's a great piece nonetheless. Good sound.

RealPublic responds:

I doesn't have to, I just did what the guy told me to do.

[(T) This Day Is Done]

Nice and calming

Good work. It looped several times before I noticed it had finished, I just kept basking in it lol

Dark-Frando responds:

woo! I'm glad you liked it enough =D

Thanks for the review! ^^

[Drag, Strip, Fuck (Bigga,Beta)]

Your swearing has conpletely ruined my life

Now I need support therapy. Lol jk. Pretty cool song. Could use a bit more variation. I'm also getting some clipping around 1:42. Is that just me?

Death-9 responds:

I tried making it a "Racing song" like my friend ph0ne told me to do. Variation is one of my weak points, but since I have the fullversion of FL I'll keep improving on it every now and then.

The clipping... I have no idea what the cause of it is. I thought it might have been a delay track, but maybe I'm wrong. Anyways, that was the lowest I could get it to. Sorry :'(

[Grace Of Angels (Redone)]

Please turn down the distortion

It's still too loud, pretty cool riffs in there, but they are somewhat lost in all that distortion. Also, see if you can't redo the drums, that sound isn't working for this track. I do see a lot of potential with this guitar work though.

Caitlinsboy responds:

Thanks Wyze-Stingray. My new one out is alot better with the guitar, the drums are just a simple beat though. Tell me what you think when you get the chance! L8er!

[Excuse My Tourettes]

Ugh.. Simple Plan meets Blink182

only shittier. This whole style has been done before. Also, your vocalist sounds really whiny and this is coming from a guy who listens to linkin park.

giftedbuttwisted responds:

Alright dude whatever thanks for the review

[Never-Quitting Knight]

Drums need to come in earlier

Not a bad melody, but a bit too repetitive. Not too bad though.

Feniiku responds:

Thanks for your review, I'll bear in mind the drum suggestion for next time ^_^

[Something Bad Happaned]

Not bad

It feels like a mourning song at the start. Is that a violin at 15 seconds? Regardless of what it is, I liked it. Really well done there. I'm not a huge fan of those high hits that come in at 1:09, but to each their own.

erdicolpan responds:

no not violin its french horn

[Hymn For The Fallen]

I'm guessing you're going for less is more?

The big picture: this song definitely gives off the effect I think you were going for.

The smaller pictures: I think you did most of the little things right. The high chorus was a great idea. I think there is just a touch too much silence from 54-59. Something needs to be added there. Also, try moving away from the synthy sounds for this. I think if you could get a more realistic sounding instrument instead of whatever that is that comes in at 13 seconds and then randomly throughout the song. Also, I think you should change your instrumentation at 49 seconds, try changing that line to something that stands out on it's own rather than sounding like multiple instruments.

Hope that helps you make this great track better

DJ-OverLord responds:

ok thnx very much listening and reviewing, I'll Update This track in a While, 'cause you're right there are some things missing, and I will do something about That Virtual Instrument,
The only problem at the moment is, I've got a lack of money:(
But I'll Fix that when I've got some more money.

Really Thnx very much for your review, I find this very Helpful;)

[_-={A Dark Cut}=-_]

Pretty sweet

Strings need to be brought out more, I love the brass though.

MaestroRage responds:

I didn't really want the strings to be prominent in this song since they are very repetitive. It would start gettings very dull if they took too much of the attention. Thank you for your feedback however, I will experiment further with those strings.

I'm glad you liked it, thanks again for the review!