Blasphem-E's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Metamorphasis]

I'm liking the flow

I think you should up the whisper levels near the end. That's the only thing that I think can be improved really. Great track

OBIEakaAO responds:

thanks, the only problem with that is that i had to turn up the gain so much it picked up a lawnmower outside i think, so there would also be a whispery lawnmowing noise lol. thanks for the review!

[Heavy Sleeper]

Overall pretty good

Whatever that instrument is that comes in around the 30 second mark seems a bit too dissonant, although that may have been on purpose. It just seems to take away from the backing piano part. I really like the intro though.

[(WF1)/F-777 Through the Mysts]

I like it

Great job with the piano, and the bass is pretty awesome. I'm going to disagree with manhart about the snare though. I personally love it at that level, although that's pretty much a matter of opinion. Great job!

wyldfyre1 responds:

Yeah, alot of the love of music is opinion. =) Thanks for the review!

[X.-Lost Army-.]

Great job so far

Now you need to finish the mastering process and make it longer. Although it's definitely going in a great direction

[Now or Never]

Man, why you even answering?

Why bother feeding the troll 3 reviews down from me? You know you're ill as shit, why bother?

As for the track, you have some ill lines in here man. One improvement would be to bring those backing vocals in the hook out more. Good work though

[First Chance At Revenge]

What do you mean "fix" the intro?

I don't have any problem with it. Unless you mean make it longer, I'd say leave it.

For some reason your first verse seems quieter than the other ones, or is that just me?

I'm feeling the anger though, way to get that across.

NimbusTheGeneral responds:

It was just a random intro, spur of the moment. I want to make something more powerful for the intro. And you're right, the first verse sounds too quiet...dunno what happened because the track on the cd I burned to the computer sounds different.

[Release feat. Nicola Foti]

Overall pretty good

It definitely needs a bass line though. Also, try to turn up your mic volume a bit. There's a few places where you are seriously competing with the beat. I do like the "weird" effect the slow-down had on Nicola's vocals though.

As for the lyrics, you did well. Somewhat moving, but would have had more effect if they had been brought out more.

Hope that helps. If you get a chance could you review some of my stuff?

[McRakoon Round 2]

Yoink's volume needs to be turned up

Most of the line's were fire, but as I mentioned, there were a few EQ issues... Not that I'm one to talk lol

[YouTube Gangstas]

Epic sarcasm

Funny shit man, well done

[I wonder]

Sweet stuff

Is that offer to add a verse still open? Because I'd love to add to this piece of awesomeness