Great job so far
Now you need to finish the mastering process and make it longer. Although it's definitely going in a great direction
Great job so far
Now you need to finish the mastering process and make it longer. Although it's definitely going in a great direction
Man, why you even answering?
Why bother feeding the troll 3 reviews down from me? You know you're ill as shit, why bother?
As for the track, you have some ill lines in here man. One improvement would be to bring those backing vocals in the hook out more. Good work though
What do you mean "fix" the intro?
I don't have any problem with it. Unless you mean make it longer, I'd say leave it.
For some reason your first verse seems quieter than the other ones, or is that just me?
I'm feeling the anger though, way to get that across.
It was just a random intro, spur of the moment. I want to make something more powerful for the intro. And you're right, the first verse sounds too quiet...dunno what happened because the track on the cd I burned to the computer sounds different.
Overall pretty good
It definitely needs a bass line though. Also, try to turn up your mic volume a bit. There's a few places where you are seriously competing with the beat. I do like the "weird" effect the slow-down had on Nicola's vocals though.
As for the lyrics, you did well. Somewhat moving, but would have had more effect if they had been brought out more.
Hope that helps. If you get a chance could you review some of my stuff?
Yoink's volume needs to be turned up
Most of the line's were fire, but as I mentioned, there were a few EQ issues... Not that I'm one to talk lol
Epic sarcasm
Funny shit man, well done
Sweet stuff
Is that offer to add a verse still open? Because I'd love to add to this piece of awesomeness
I'm loving this
Way to kill the beat guys. Pretty awesome lyrics. And ya, fuck the mainstream. Anyways, any chance you guys are open for a collab?
We will be soon enough but right now we're trying to get things going and we'll let you know if anything man.
My headphones actually broke
Just as I started to listen to this my right headphone stopped working, but given the overall quality of this, I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt as per the richness of the beat. Sounds awesome from what I'm able to hear
lol ha. That must be a good thing then. Thanks man for your reveiw
Awesome
I'm going to use this to rap over. Expect a PM from me with a link to my usage of it within a week. This is great man.
Thanks man yeah, hit me up with the link when your done.!
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