A bit too repetitive for my liking
It's a cool sound but there needs to be more in there. I like what you did at 2:27 but it was too late. An then from about 3:15 on you completely changed it. That would be cool but you need to be sure to keep a constant feel going through the change. Although I do like the backing line in that segment.
Whenever I make a beat, I imagine a movie in my mind. The Up part is from the start of the song to about when it changes. Imagine flying out of a tunnel or cage and you can see the light. Thats how I saw it. The Out is when the song changed and now Im free to do whatever in the world. Its just how I make my music. I hear and see the music. Thanks for the score though. At least you listened to it. LOL YEAH!!!
Pretty cool
Nice sound at the start there, good and creepy. I also like how you phase in those synths or whatever they are. Although I think if you want to win this thing you're going to need to find a way to elevate this even more. This is good, but you're likely going to be up against some awesome stuff.
i know. i need to build it up even more, but it just wasn't coming to me. i plan on working hard on this. just wanted to know if i even had a solid base on which to build on. i plan on doing more with an "organized chaos" d'n'b drum line in there, and some fx if possible, and an aggressive synth. just wanted to see if i was heading in the right direction. thanks so much for the listen and review!!!!
Bass level is up too high
Try to lower that a bit. Other than that, this is pretty cool, I like the piano or whatever else that is.
I noticed there wasn't enough treble, but again my speakers suck so I can't really tell if it's too loud or not. This is all done on guitar with some delay and chorus effect with a lot of reverb.
Thank you for reviewing!
Fits the bill
It's exactly what you said it was. It would be pretty cool for a dungeon.
hah thanks man i was debating whether to call it creepy dungeon music or creepy forest music...
As I said last night
Good comes from the bad, here's a perfect example of that. You made this amazing loop from numbness. I'd say you should do it again, but I'd rather you didn't go destroying all your stuff
stuff is stuff, it can be replaced but suffing for art that is a ture delight
This will be a great track when it's done
It does need to be filled out a bit more, but so far it' sounds pretty sweet
Hey :D yeah, im well aware of that :P i guess it'll be some major adjustments in this song. Mixer, choice of synths, melodies and so on will probably be altered :P Im glad you liked it and thanks for the review and the "8" :D its much appritiated ^^
Pretty cool
The drums need to be changed up, too standard. It's a pretty cool synth loop you have with this one. I do like the volume on the bass synth as well, even if it doesn't mix in too well. My only other issue with it is that it stays a bit too similar all the way through. Still a good track though.
yeah i agree it is pretty repetitive
its actually quite hard to hear some of the synths i have running through this one, they get a little drowned out
Reminds me of mario kart
menu music. Good sound. I think the bass sticks out a bit too much for this sort of track, but it's not horrible
mhhh yes...probably you are right about the bass...unfortunately I love bass too much, and I add it everywhere :P LOL!
thank you for your review :)
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Try adding a string line
from around the end of this on for a bit. Also, turn up your bass a bit. As for the piano part, moving past what you have, my only suggestion for the next bit would be to keep repeating it with a few minor variations each time. Great job so far though man.
it was just a demo to go off. its nothing but a shit loop. nothing i do comes out good and it sounds like all the same shit that i have made in the past
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